Jim, this is such a great idea and as always I love your typography and the decorative embellishments I especially like the way it's all a little off-kilter and nothing's really a right angle.
I think that texturally it's looking a little flat though I don't know how invested you are in this but I think it could really benefit from the same kind of treatment you gave that piece for Mark's class, the one with the flattering portrait... something to really accentuate the hand-drawn element, because right now the clean digital look is fighting with the looseness of the lines and placement of objects, I think.
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Oh, I see...yes, the faces are much more pink in the print. And the oranges are less saturated. Ah well...it's still a good print.
I like the blue.
Jim, this is such a great idea and as always I love your typography and the decorative embellishments
I especially like the way it's all a little off-kilter and nothing's really a right angle.
I think that texturally it's looking a little flat though
I don't know how invested you are in this but I think it could really benefit from the same kind of treatment you gave that piece for Mark's class, the one with the flattering portrait... something to really accentuate the hand-drawn element, because right now the clean digital look is fighting with the looseness of the lines and placement of objects, I think.
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