I know you had something to do with what happened to my homework.

First, for Travis, here's how the creature turned out:

(I really hope Sara posts hers too, because it turned out very nicely)

Now I need some advice on the upcoming "narrative" assignment. I'm pretty happy with it, but there's still an "unfinished" feeling about it, and I can't tell what is missing. I know I overworked the watercolor in the smoke, but that can't really be changed much so try not to be too brutal with critiques. I just have the vague feeling that there needs to be just one more object or color, but I don't know what or where.